Friday, 6 April 2018

Victoria

Victoria   is   a  pink  lamigini

Victoria is  a  banana tree

Victoria  is  a  piece   of    paper  in  the  night  sky

Victoria  is  a  ham  sliced sandwich  

Victoria  is  a  pink  striped   t-shirt
 
By  victoria  

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous2 May 2018 at 12:34

    Hi Victoria, I am Carys I am from Wainui Beach school
    I like the way you presented your work, it really hooked me in and made me want to read more. It kind of reminds me of when our class did a piece of writing when we compared ourselves to places and items. Oh and i was just wondering was the word at the top was it meant to be lamigini or was it lamborghini because the way you spelt it was lamigini. Keep up the good work.
    By Carys

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  2. Anonymous2 May 2018 at 12:56

    Hi am Sarah from Wainui Beach School in Gisborne. I like that you said that you were a pink striped t-shirt and all the information about what you think you are. I have never written a poem like that about myself, I wonder how I would describe myself?
    From Sarah

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